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i think we should do something on school uniforms for the idea for school. Who: the students and school board What: school uniforms When: recently Where: Lincoln, R.I. Why: most students dont want school uniforms How: no how
What makes a good lead is all your information crammed into one sentence, respectively. This sentence should be right at the begining of your article.
Example:
Who: Mr. Mac What: Principal of LHS proposes new uniform idea When:October of 2010 Where: Lincoln High School Why: Feels this change would put the students in a better view of conduct and perform more acts of good deeds, and be much more kind to one another.
Who: Jon Wahl What: Made the soccer team When: In early September Where: On Chet Nichols field Why: Because he is skilled How: The coach decided he was good enough to play for his team
who: Rose Tracy what: fell on her face in the hallway and spilt her hot coffee all over herself. when: monday morning after first period where: Lincoln High School why: she tripped over a banana peel in the middle of the hallway
Who: Lhs girls hockey team What: trying to start hockey team for girls Where: Lincoln High School When: there was a meeting like last week How: get enough girls to sign up and play
Idea: Homework Who: Teachers What: Giving too much homework When: This school year Where: Lincoln High School Why: To help kids understand the class work
Who: Jackyln Desimone What: Came to school in a bathing suit When: October 15, 2010 Where:LHS Why: Her friends were all doing the same thing. How: By putting her bathing suit on top of her clothes.
Who: The Students at LHS What: Spirit Week When: Spirit Week in November Where: LHS Why: to show school spirit and to see which grade has the most school spirit
Who: Students of LHS What: are late for class When: during the school day Where: Lincoln High School Why: because their classrooms are located too far away
Who: students What: wearing purple When: wednesday Oct.18 Where: Lincoln High School Why: in memory of the gay boys that shot them selves
Students at Lincoln High School are wearing purple in memory of the homosexual boys that commited suicide because of bullying. This takes place on Wednesday October 18.
Who: Lincoln High School Comittee What:Put cameras in the school When:During the summer Why:To monitor the students How: By installing them on the celings
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ReplyDeleteidea's:
ReplyDelete1. someone wins big game
2. might have first ever girl hockey team
3. necap
4. homework
5. dances
Andrew Veiga
ReplyDeleteWho: the lhs student body
What: wants to wear hats
Where: in school
When: 7:30-1:49
Why: they want more freedom
How: by placing the hat on their head
i think we should do something on school uniforms for the idea for school.
ReplyDeleteWho: the students and school board
What: school uniforms
When: recently
Where: Lincoln, R.I.
Why: most students dont want school uniforms
How: no how
Who: The Students of LHS
ReplyDeleteWhat: Getting to much homework
When: All the time
Where: LHS
Why: because the standard is set to high for students today
What makes a good lead is all your information crammed into one sentence, respectively. This sentence should be right at the begining of your article.
ReplyDeleteExample:
Who: Mr. Mac
What: Principal of LHS proposes new uniform idea
When:October of 2010
Where: Lincoln High School
Why: Feels this change would put the students in a better view of conduct and perform more acts of good deeds, and be much more kind to one another.
HI dimezza!
Who: Michaela Voyer
ReplyDeleteWhat: Got a goal in field hockey
Where: Cumberland
When: Monday night
Why: She works very hard in practice
1) Joe Hamilton
ReplyDelete2) keeps writing the about the FH team
3) Every day that he is on a computer
4) At Lincoln High School
5) He wishes he was on the team
Who: Jon Wahl
ReplyDeleteWhat: Made the soccer team
When: In early September
Where: On Chet Nichols field
Why: Because he is skilled
How: The coach decided he was good enough to play for his team
who: Rose Tracy
ReplyDeletewhat: fell on her face in the hallway and spilt her hot coffee all over herself.
when: monday morning after first period
where: Lincoln High School
why: she tripped over a banana peel in the middle of the hallway
I agree with zach, we definitely do get too much homework... (THIS ONE GOES OUT TO YOU DIMEZZ!) just kidding...kind of..
ReplyDeleteWho: Lhs girls hockey team
ReplyDeleteWhat: trying to start hockey team for girls
Where: Lincoln High School
When: there was a meeting like last week
How: get enough girls to sign up and play
Who:Jessica Salvadore
ReplyDeletewhat:goes to school 5 times a week
When: from 7:30-1:49
Where: lincoln high school
Why: to get an education
Idea: Homework
ReplyDeleteWho: Teachers
What: Giving too much homework
When: This school year
Where: Lincoln High School
Why: To help kids understand the class work
Who: Jackyln Desimone
ReplyDeleteWhat: Came to school in a bathing suit
When: October 15, 2010
Where:LHS
Why: Her friends were all doing the same thing.
How: By putting her bathing suit on top of her clothes.
Who: The Students at LHS
ReplyDeleteWhat: Spirit Week
When: Spirit Week in November
Where: LHS
Why: to show school spirit and to see which grade has the most school spirit
Who: Students of LHS
ReplyDeleteWhat: are late for class
When: during the school day
Where: Lincoln High School
Why: because their classrooms are located too far away
Who: Students of LHS
ReplyDeleteWhat: getting bullied
where: at and after school
when: inbetween classes and after school
Why: bully is insecure
Who: students
ReplyDeleteWhat: wearing purple
When: wednesday Oct.18
Where: Lincoln High School
Why: in memory of the gay boys that shot them selves
Students at Lincoln High School are wearing purple in memory of the homosexual boys that commited suicide because of bullying. This takes place on Wednesday October 18.
I like Marissa ending "Hi Dimezza"
ReplyDeletei agree with zach
ReplyDeleteWho: Lincoln High School Comittee
ReplyDeleteWhat:Put cameras in the school
When:During the summer
Why:To monitor the students
How: By installing them on the celings
nice post tyge
ReplyDeleteWho: Students at LHS
ReplyDeleteWhat: Overwhelmed by homework
When: After school
Where: At home